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Kate I am 13 year old. I was born in Japan. My family and I move to Cleveland. In Cleveland, I don’t have any friends. I miss mine friend in Japan. Back in Japan ,my family always planted Japanese maple tree. The maple tree was bright red and that one of my favorite color. Now that is all gone. I have to go to school everyday. I only know a little bit of English. I had a home to write about my own culture. After school I start walking home. I saw this name mane Sae Young. She gave me a job to help her swept the floor in her store. I rush home to tell mine mom and dad. I saw this girl call Kim with Ana in the garden planting lima beans. I was thinking about planting a Japanese maple tree to remind me of Japan. I wrote my culture was a kimono dress up in pretty coats and started dancing .When I was done with mine work. I thought that I should plant a Japanese maple tree. The next day I saw Ana watering the plants. I planted my Japanese maple tree next to the Kim s’ plants. Last night ,I saw Kim ,Ana , Wendell ,and Sam there watering my tree, I went out side and talk to them even through I don’t talk to people much. But at least I should say thank you for watering mine tree. I talk to Kim about the garden and what is she planting next. The next day I went and help Sae Young swept the floor for her store. Then I went to school .I cant wait till after school so I can see the garden. I feel happier now since Kim talk to me and help with the garden. Back home, I was thinking about asking my parent to help with the garden. The next day I went to school. I saw this new kid call Gonzalo he was new to this school and he was the same room as me. He sit next to me in class. I said “hi” to him.Gonzald said “hi back”. I ask him where he live? He said he live at that apartment where I live. I told him about the garden near the lot .Gonzalo said ‘‘he want to help ’’.So I told him we could go plant at the garden after school. We had a lot of homework. So Gonzalo and I did our homework at a park. When we finish with our homework. We start walking to the apartment .We saw Sae Young there watering the plants in the garden. It was late at night. Gonzalo and I just smile at Sae Young and then walk inside the apartment. Then I wave good bye to Gonzalo. When I got home .My father ask me “How was school today?” I said it was good. Then I start telling my dad about the garden and the friends I made. Also the people who help water the tree and the plants like Kim, Ana and Wendell. My dad was surprise and was so proud of me that I make so much friends. Kim knock at mine door and give me some vegetable that she planted. I said “thank you to her.This time when I went to school. I stop by Sae Young s’ store and give her some vegetable that Kim give to me.Sae Young said “I was so kind.” At school Gonzalo ask me if I want to meet his parent they were thinking of planting something in the garden. I said “yes’’. Then the teacher start teaching math .We had so little homework that day. So I finish my homework very quickly. After school Gonzalo play soccer with me. This is like the friends I had in Japan. I didn’t feel homesick anymore. I went to meet Gonzalo s’ parents. They were kind. I went home .Out the window I saw Nora planting flowers in the garden with Mr.Myles.I smile at them. When I was eating dinner I ask my mother “How did you feel when we have to leave Japan and come to Cleveland ?” She just said “As long as we have good friends, good neighbors and we are together. I was always be happy. That night I call my best friend In Japan. I told her all about the garden and the friend I made. okay help me find any mistake.The one wh o fine the most miskate get best answer

Public Comments

1. so.... you're a thirteen year old Japanese girl in Cleveland and you don't have any friends? none? i think you're beyond help there.
2. I think it's good....I'm just a bit confused...... what exactly are you asking? Is this a story or real?
3. you said Gonzalo was a new kid at school, so you said he tp "Gonzald". they're two different names. why was sae young watering the garden, didn't she own/ work at the shop? why did kim knock on your door when it was "very late"